נושא: Regret

שיר חדש, הפעם באנגלית:

Everything seems different when
I turn my head backwards

Now my shadows are further
Now my shadows are further

I used to think
that now we'd be
through all those strange
moments

Now my shadows are further
Now my shadows are further

And as I break anoter wall of sadness
I meet you again in my mind
your eyes
your silence
your long goodbyes
the never ending sighs of mine

With every day
that passes by
I think of what
I feel inside

Now your figure is further
Now your figure is further

And in my dreams
You come to me
and say
"please don't regret"

because the song is in english i will write also in english
your lyrics are good and they are deep but i barely saw the rhymes
you were good so i give you 10\9.9

אהבתי.
אני מרגיש את הצורך של הדמות שלך, כשהיא מבקשת ממנו לא להתחרט על כך. אני רק יכול לדמיין על מה.

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